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Very nice little piece of work.

I'll admit, when I saw the file size, I expected something diappointing. Sometimes, however it's nice to be wrong once in a while. This only got a 4 and a 9 because of great music and the moving simple story. Some more animation and maybe some voicework would make this a 10/10 and 5/5 fro certain. The type of work you have submitted is always welcome and wanted. Never doubt that for a second. Tell me if you plan on continuing this as a series. Please and thank you for the nice animation.

Sincrely,

DarkX

P.S: I favorited this :).

Jamieneo66 responds:

Thank you for the fave ^^
And also for adding me to your fave flash artists =D makes me feel appreciated :)
The reason theres no voicework, is mainly because the mic i have isn't that great, if it was better i would do some voicework, but future projects i'll start messing around with that as i'm still new at flash XD
And yes i do plan to continue this, even if its only three or four episodes long, i'll continue it so please.
Look forward to it ^^ :)

eeenhh...

Animation was good, sound was a little off and not to interesting and it wasn't entirely that original. But your work with flash is apparent. Take a class or watch a tutorial before your next one and I willing to bet I'll give a 10/10 and 5/5 then. For now, you'll have to settle for 7/10 and 3/5.

Beginner indeed.

But I don't think you suck, you just need sound, longer movies and the ability to combine both tweening and fbf animation. I wish you luck finding out how to do better next time.

What? New to Flash?

This well put together fight scene says otherwise. All that keeps this from a 10/10 is some stale fighting at the end, hectic screens and bad sound quality. Fix these problems and throw in some juicy special fx and you'll almost be on level with Alvin-Earthworm, perhaps the best spriter I've seen. I see promise in this. And as a last question, did you use the original japaneese audio? It sounds like it, cuz Goku's voice was weird. Other than that, keep up the good work. I like forward to seeing your future high octane, high quality fight scenes that use sprites.

Wow, Whoa and COOL!

That was pretty a) Freaky b) Awesome and c) Freakishly Awesome (Freak-some?) I'am diggin the different style, cool song and funny story. Like an abstract marriage of Fantasia and Salad Fingers. Do some more stuff like this please!

Captain responds:

Ha ha thanks. I'm hoping to do some more small animations in the future.

"We all worked are(?) buts off..."

Not really. Unless You just started flash today. At least if that was the case, you shoulda stick with tweens cause when I still had the program I realized I can do FBF and it looks like crap. Or, I could do tweens and make something halfway decent. For the assload of flaws, which are to blatantly obvious to actually list, I could have easily said BLAM THIS PIECE OF CRAP! But I didn't. Consider that for next time.

lgnxhll responds:

tweens basicly kill a whole layer and arnt worht your trouble

Huh?

Animation was alright but the story was... confusing... to say the least. If there's anything that needs to be known prior to it's viewing please let me know.

lejwocky responds:

Reading the two stories would help a bit, though they don't have the little surreal man.
End of Something can be read at www.repeatafterus.com/title.php?i=875 2
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